1) The pitch. Same as last time, 1-minute long. No Web cams. No sitting. Be dynamic! Upload the video to YouTube (as you do with all of your videos) and post the link.
https://youtu.be/oykwz31i3Do
2) A reflection on the feedback you received from your last pitch. Describe what stood out to you as important, what feedback surprised you the most, what feedback you think was outright wrong or silly.
The feedback I received on my last pitch was that my idea was to complicated to explain in 60 seconds, as well as being too broad and lacking in details to actually be effective. A lot of praise was given as a result of my hook and dress attire. What was silly was judging my idea on the basis of being feasible as of course, it is hence, why I proposed it.
3) What did you change, based on the feedback?
Changes made to the presentation were as follows: Actually had proper dress and incorporated it into the pitch. My idea was simple and to the point, and had an actual basis in reality. Another thing was compare myself to the competition and say why my idea was better.
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