Pitch: https://youtu.be/eAmW0dT57ZI
Reflection: I heard from all the reviewers that my pitch was good yet, they had problems understanding the technical side of my product. That in mind, I decided to create a simple proposal for a simple product.
Changes: Instead of an illusion box, I decided to create a product that mints coins and morphs them via pressure and heat to any design they want. This idea is already done, yet not in the personal level that I am envisioning as someone can order their own pressure stamp to mint their own unique coin.
4 comments:
Hey Michael! I think your idea is good & your pitch was also good. You were dynamic in your speaking and I really enjoyed listening to your pitch. I would not personally use this product but I am sure many people would! If you would like to see my pitch, it can be found here: https://youtu.be/eAmW0dT57ZI
Michael, just a couple things that could improve you pitch video: put the camera at more of an eyesight level, looking down at us didn’t look great. Also, your pitch (like mine, unfortunately) is a little long and you could be more concise. I am curious as to who you would market this product to, but otherwise I liked your pitch!
Check out my pitch: http://emilysentblog.blogspot.com/2016/02/elevator-pitch-no-2.html
Hey Micheal! I think your idea is super interesting and unique. Are the coins still going to be 51 cents or however much they cost at a theme park? Maybe in your next pitch you can draw up a sketch of what your personalized coin would look like so we can get a better idea of what the product will look like. I liked how personable your pitch was and the anecdotes you started off with. Great job. You can check out my pitch about my pet-friendly coffee shop at this link:
http://rmathisonent3003.blogspot.com/2016/02/elevator-pitch-no-2.html
MICHAEL!
Wow long time no see my friend. Glad I was put into your group so that I could hear your idea cause I definitely know that you have some crazy ideas! This was a great idea you did a great job in your pitch too! It was great and I definitely think you should go through with it! Here is mine if you want to check it out! http://jhoreckyblog.blogspot.com/2016/02/elevator-pitch-no-2.html
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